Saturday, December 29, 2007

Recommended Reading and Seeing!!

It has been a while since I posted but I have just been enjoying the opportunity to relax so much that I haven't had a chance to post on here.

Well, let me fill you in on my writing news. I have a 4000 writing assignment for my MA due in about two weeks and I have been doing a fair bit of reading towards it. So far I have read Monster and The Beast by Walter Dean Myers, a writer recommended to me by an American colleague. And a good thing too. His works are perfect research for my next project.

I have also read Negotiating with the Dead by Margaret Atwood - a non-fiction book on writing which is on the MA secondary reading list and is highly rated on Amazon, but I am sad to say I found it a bit of a yawn. I prefer Atwood's masterly fiction. Stephen King's On Writing for me is a much livelier account of the writing process which I am now dipping into. I am also reading Party Girl by Lynne Ewing and have a couple of other fiction books and a pile of non-fiction books I'll be referring to before I complete my assignment.

Other news; since last posting, I went to see The Golden Compass at the cinema which was an entertaining, engaging and magical film, well worth seeing.

If you get a chance, go see it.

Hope you all are enjoying the festive season and your (no doubt) well earned rest!!

Saturday, December 15, 2007

Good News


Good news number 1: I am officially on holiday! YAY.

Despite the dark and cold I am determined to have a good break. I may even escape this hideous weather and find some warmer climes to enjoy. I have some work to do for my MA but I have no intention of not relaxing.

Good news number 2: earlier this week I discovered that my writer friend Candy Gourlay had got herself an agent, which is not surprising given how fantastic a writer she is. It is of course brilliant news and encouraging for all us unagented writers.

I went out for a pub lunch today with a friend in an attempt to distract myself from the weather and tomorrow I am trying out meditation for the first time and spending some time with another friend. I shall hopefully be very relaxed after the meditation and definitely in holiday mood.

Sunday, December 09, 2007

Looking forward

Well, just this week left before we break for Christmas holidays and I can safely say I cannot wait.

I am completely exhausted after a very busy term and, with the weather as miserable as it is, I am looking forward to not having to get up in the dark and return home in the dark.

I am also looking forward to reading all these books as part of my preparation for an MA writing assignment:
What my Mother Doesn't Know
by Sonya Sones; Stop Pretending: what happened when my big sister went crazy by Sonya Sones; Monster by Walter Dean Myers; Beast by Walter Dean Myers and Street Love by Walter Dean Myers.

I'm also doing some other research and reading but I won't bore you with it now! I shall save that for another day.

I went swimming yesterday and for a walk today in an attempt to beat the winter blues and, well, with just this week to go I think I am well on the way to happy land.

Tuesday, December 04, 2007

Eye Candy

Well it's been a week since my last post so probably time for an update, methinks.

I am seriously tired; my eye is twitching in a comical fashion because of this. Yes, go on imagine it.

Well, it's either the tiredness or my contacts that are causing this twitching! Aah... contact lenses. I have this really weird fear of being somewhere like a desert island and losing my contacts and glasses and not being able to see - a thing. I hate being dependent on anything! I have actually contemplated getting laser surgery on my eyes because of this ridiculous fear.

In any case, that is not why I am here.

I am here to tell you about American Gangster, the film, which, those readers in the UK will know, is out at cinemas at the moment. I went to see this film a couple of weekends ago with a friend, for no particular reason other than it looked to be the best thing out at the time and well... despite it being not at all my kind of thing, I was completely into the film. It was a thought provoking and fascinating insight into not only one man's life but the very nature of gangsters who could so easily be depicted as cardboard stereotypes.

Even if you hate violence, are not a man or don't like films about gangsters watch American Gangster. It stars the gorgeous and fantastic actor, Denzel Washington, and the equally talented Russel Crowe, not looking his Gladiator (which incidentally had the same director as American Gangster) best, but still strangely alluring. For all you ladies out there, I'd go for the eye candy! That way, anything else you get out of the film will be a bonus.

Tuesday, November 27, 2007

SCBWI Writer's Day

Hello one, hello all

I am in the middle of the most exciting task of writing reports, so of course in my work avoidance mode, I have decided to write a post, whilst listening to the wonderful and legendary Fairuz, a Lebanese singer.

Well, to be honest, I feel obliged to spread the glorious news that SCBWI Writer's Day was fantastic, awesome and spectacularly brilliant.

I attended the critique and social on the Friday evening, which was a really useful exercise. I drank copious amounts of wine, met some new writers and illustrators and talked through a manuscript I am currently working on. Saturday was jam packed full of writerly fun. The brilliant David Almond was the keynote speaker and his talk was inspiring. He talked about how it had taken him 17 years to finally get a full book published. That gives me hope!

I then attended a seminar run by Cornerstones which was very useful and another by Andrew Melrose, writer and lecturer at Winchester University, and of course alongside all this bookish stuff I got to meet with some fellow blogging writers, people like Jon, Anita, Sue, Candy and Addy. In fact Candy gave a pretty fab talk on the internet and writing. She's a mega energetic, absolutely fabulous font of knowledge!

So, in all a wholly inspiring weekend. Well worth the effort.

Friday, November 23, 2007

Liberation


I am feeling strangely exhilarated. Today something happened that upset me greatly at first but then when I thought about it, I felt released- like a huge burden had been lifted.

I no longer felt committed to a path and I realised something that I think I had forgotten.

And that was liberating.

So was talking to a few close friends and relatives, and getting their advice and feeling supported. It's all very cloak and dagger, I know... but it has to be, I'm afraid. Don't ask me why! It's a secret. Shhh.

What isn't cloak and dagger is the fact that I have to complete almost 100 reports for Wednesday, the end of term publication by the end of tomorrow, I have a writing assignment for Monday and I am attending the SCBWI Writer's Day in Winchester this weekend, which, incidentally, I am REALLY looking forward to. I hope it is as good as people have said.

In the winter darkness, my MA is my light; writing and exploring children's novels provide such a relief from the weight I find myself under at the moment. I can whole heartedly recommend doing an MA.

Friday, November 16, 2007

Meditation


My last post was rather a miserable one, I have to admit, but it comes on the back of a very stressful time in work and a general feeling that I am getting little reward for my hard work. But such is life I guess. And there are many more worse off than me.

I'm trying to get myself into a more positive frame of mind today. Can you tell?

To this end, I am going to meditate and listen to music, go for a walk and try to relax.

A friend of a friend has asked to see some of my writing with the view to perhaps helping me get published. This is of course very positive but as always I am not going to get my hopes up, just in case, as has happened before, nothing comes of it.

Okay, time to meditate.

Friday, November 09, 2007

Every day is a weekend

It's Friday and that means the weekend, and that means -tidying my place, reading and yes, joy of joys... sleep oh sweet sleep. I am feeling seriously sleep deprived. And grumpy. Why? Oh there are many reasons but for now I shall tell you the most relevant. REJECTION. Yes, I got yet another rejection from a publisher for my teen novel.

A month or so ago I got an email from a reader at Chicken House who had read my first three chapters and liked them. She asked me to email a synopsis of my novel One of a Kind and promptly then asked for the whole novel. I sent this to Chicken House with little hope but what hope I had has been DASHED.

I got a letter from her two days ago telling me that she enjoyed reading the book, liked the background which she felt was authentic but didn't think the lead character's story was strong enough. Those of you who have followed my blog for sometime will be aware that this novel has had a number of comments passed on it, ranging from it having a strong story to it not having one, so I think it's safe to say that these things are subjective. Of course I like the book but I am biased. Nevertheless I have decided to put this particular novel to the side for now and concentrate on my other ones.

I have a whole load of work to do for my MA and a ton of marking for work, so I can't really afford to dwell on these or any other rejections but suffice to say that these experiences have made me contemplate running off to a tropical paradise where every day is a weekend and I can sleep beneath palm trees listening to the gentle lapping of the ocean as I plot my next novel!

Pity, I don't have the money.

Monday, October 29, 2007

Reading and being pampered

I am in the middle of reading Tiger by Geoffrey Malone, as part of my MA in Writing for Children. After our reading week, this week, I am supposed to give a presentation on the book and author.

So far, I am quite enjoying the read, although the subject of tigers does not particularly interest me. However, I cannot for the life of me find any detailed information about the author who has not responded to my email. Perhaps he did and it got lost in cyberspace or perhaps my email to him went down a deep, dark, black hole in the vastness of the internet- something like this:


I may approach his editor whose email I also have. In any case I am considering how best to give my presentation and what to include. As part of my studies, I am also reading Junk by Melvin Burgess and am due to read Criss Cross by Lynne Rae Perkins. I am glad I have this two week half term to do all of this. Otherwise I would be seriously falling behind. I need to also complete a 1000 word writing assignment for the MA and re-read Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde as I will be teaching this to my fast track GCSE students when I go back to work.

It is comforting then to be visiting my Dad and his wife; I do not have to worry about having to cook and clean and I can be pampered for once. Unfortunately I may get too used to all of this and may even have to resort to employing a housekeeper ... when I make my millions of course?!!!

Tuesday, October 16, 2007

The Return of the Muse

Okay, yesterday, at my MA class, I was seriously inspired. Perhaps it was the exercise. Perhaps it was the timing.

Whatever it was, I have a new idea for a novel which I am going to work with. I have to say that sadly once again I'm going for gritty realism. I wish I could do magic or something surreal, but it seems that magic and fantasy just aren't up my alley, at the moment.

Maybe they will come to me at a later date. My adult novel is on hold currently but with my half term coming up I am really looking forward to getting some reading and writing done. I think I have found my muse once more.

Sunday, October 07, 2007

MA in Writing for Children

Following requests to post about my MA in Writing For Children, here I am posting about it.

As I am doing the course part time over two years, I attend one weekly session at the Winchester site for three hours. So far I have attended two sessions. My first was an introduction to the course and to my current module Creativity led by Judy Waite.

So far, the sessions have been a mixture of discussion and writing. Last week we discussed Roald Dahl's BFG and did a little bit of linked creative writing. Previous to this, we took part in a writing exercise stimulated by some secret objects.

This week we'll be discussing The Bad Beginning and following up on some creative writing homework. Yes, we get homework! And this week, having had a cough and cold to contend with, getting the homework sorted has been a challenge!

Other students following the course on a full time basis cover another module but as far as my experience of the course so far...so far so good!

Tuesday, September 25, 2007

Writing Strengths

Verillion tagged me with a meme to list five things that I am good at, as a writer, so here goes:

1- Coming up with ideas and opening lines or pages
2- Observing others and mentally noting things for future reference
3- Typing
4- Getting excited about what I am doing
5- Reading material to help me write better

I could equally list another five that I am not so good at like gluing my bum to a seat and getting on with it or scheduling 'me' time for writing.

These last two I will see as learning opportunities as Rob Long would say and I will work them round to a positive... somehow. I WILL make more time!

Saturday, September 15, 2007

Catch up News

This weekend I have a ton of paperwork to get through and I've just mowed the lawn. Go figure. I just need to fix myself to a chair and do it!

I heard back from an editor at Puffin who kindly looked at One of a Kind, even though Puffin don't usually accept unsolicited manuscripts. She said she enjoyed it and kept reading as she wanted to know what happened, which is a good sign, I think. However, she didn't think it was strong enough for the small and competitive teen market.

She suggested I re-write it for a younger audience and that I change some elements of it. That novel has been redrafted too many times for me to remember and I've had a lot of conflicting suggestions regarding it, so I'm going to put it in a drawer for now.

I haven't done much writing recently as work has been really hectic. We had a twilight inset yesterday on behaviour from an educational psychologist, Rob Long, who summarised his talk into several mantras for us. Let's see if I can remember them:

Fight fire with water
Analyse the behaviour; don't personalise
The problem is the solution not the student
Every mistake is a learning opportunity


I was also contacted this week by a producer at Teachers' TV who was wanting to talk to me about perhaps helping out with a programme. As it turns out they no longer need me, but the producer said she'd keep my details on file. I've been on TV before, in 2004 when I was filmed at my then writer's group, in Westminster for an interactive part of Jeremy Vine's BBC series Page Turners.

Who knows maybe I will be hitting the screens again?!! Now, back to my marking.

Sunday, September 02, 2007

Memories

It's back to work tomorrow. Joy of joys!

But before I get caught up in the frenzy that is my life in term time, I thought I'd post a few pics from my holiday in Kuwait. If you haven't joined Facebook, join it. Now.

I managed to locate three friends from my primary and secondary schools that I haven't seen in over ten and in some cases twenty years. Isn't the internet amazing!

I've also been looking into taking up a team sport and a martial art. I will keep you updated about whether these things actually materialise. If they do... not sure where the writing will fit in... mmm so much to do ... so little time.

Here are the pictures in any case!

Friday, August 31, 2007

Holiday

After my extended holiday, I have been madly trying to catch up on work.

Proofs for the Philip Allan Key Stage 3 English Teacher Resources for Year 9 arrived and have been read and amended. I didn't quite make the SCBWI anthology competition and I haven't done as much writing as I'd hoped to but I have been to the gym and I have relaxed so, all in all, I'd say I've had a good holiday.

I'm trying to tease out my last two days now.....

Friday, August 24, 2007

Memory Lane

I am writing this with a very slow internet connection... we're talking slower than a snail, so this will be short and sweet and I will definitely not be attempting to upload any pictures. It is 45 degrees centigrade in the shade out here in Kuwait where I have been taking a walk down memory lane, it being the place I grew up. Given that it's been some seventeen years since I was last here, things have changed just a little.

I've visited my brother and his family who now live here. My three nephews who are lovely in small doses have, after ten days, driven me on occasion round the metaphorical bend and solidified my beliefs regarding when and whether to have children?!!

Nevertheless, I've reminisced, I've read, I've swum and I've shopped. And I have the slightest tan and painted toe nails. All in all, I'd say it's been a wholly successful and relaxing holiday. Back to the UK later today, so it'll be back to normality tomorrow. And back to school next week. I cannot wait ;-)

Tuesday, August 14, 2007

A Poem

I wrote a poem today which I thought I'd post for your consumption, inspired by Jason Evans' poem on his blog.

It tasted crunchy at first
Like grit in my mouth
Then bitter and hard
Stinging my throat

Like crumbling rock
It caught
between
my teeth
And stuck.

It clung there
Lingering

Before a sweet
subtle
softness
Tingled on my tongue

Where it rests now waiting

Friday, August 10, 2007

Fitness Frenzy

I am still in Wales, although I am hoping to go abroad soon for a bit of a break which will be nice. I may even come back with a tan.

You'll be thrilled to hear that I went to the gym again yesterday even though I am 'sporting' a bit of a back injury- one I sustained when I played badminton.

I'm on a bit of a keep fit frenzy at the moment, in case you hadn't guessed and I'm hoping to sign up to a few different things when I'm back home. I'm looking forward to getting back some old fitness. Will let you know how I get on.

This of course means that I have had little time to write- excuses, excuses- but I have been reading a little. Hope all of you are enjoying the summer.

Sunday, August 05, 2007

KS3 CHALLENGE ENGLISH

I discovered yesterday that my co-written texts for WH Smith are now on display and available in WH Smith shops, so if you are looking for some excellent texts for your no doubt bright kids so that they can practise and improve their English reading and writing skills beyond what they might do in a classroom then please do purchase a book. I took the liberty of snapping the books on display. Here are the Year 8 and Year 9 books!

Friday, August 03, 2007

On a high

I am feeling psyched and very very positive today. This is for several reasons but I shall just name a few here:

1- I went to the gym and am on an adrenaline high

2- I am honoured to have been given a thoughtful blogger award by Verilion

3- I spent an evening with my nieces and nephew earlier this week and had an entertaining and enjoyable conversation with my lovely niece Hannah, aged 4, who is just sweetness itself

4- I have been having fun on Facebook.... throwing food, biting and poking people

Tuesday, July 31, 2007

Let's play tag and get fit!

I went to the Gower today, a beautiful area in Swansea, on the coast, so I got to walk on the beach! I also went to the gym and am going again tomorrow! I am trying to get back to my former fitness.

Wilf over at Wilf's World has tagged me with this meme so I thought it best to play along. I thought I'd go global so...

5 people who will be annoyed that I tagged them.. mmm:

Jason over at Clarity of Night and in the US who is in the middle of hosting a competition (which I entered by the way)and will probably be too busy to do this!
Nicky (aka Absolute) in South Africa who's always up for speaking her mind
Jon M over at Writing in a Vacuum who's recently visited here and who's a fellow teacher in the UK
Verilion in Paris and Sally in Australia! Let's see whether they take up the challenge.


4 things to go into room 101 and be removed forever from the face of this earth:
Parasites- all kinds
Liquorice- yuk, hate the stuff
Donald Trump's wig- who's he kidding?!
War (had to do my Miss United Kingdom bit)

3 things that people do that make me want to shake them violently are:
Repeat the same mistake over and over and over and over again
Not adapt to changing circumstances
Indulge in self pity and laziness (is that two?)

2 things that I find myself moaning about are:
People who are lazy
People who are intransigent

1 thing the above answers tell me about myself is:
I don't like lazy intransigent unadaptable wig wearing, liquorice eating parasites

Your turn!!

Tuesday, July 24, 2007

Glorious Sunshine

What do these singers have in common: Katie Melua, Jamie Cullum, David Gray and Fairuz?

Guessed yet? It's a silly question really because you wouldn't know unless you were sitting here next to me. The answer? Their CDs have all been bought by me.

It's been a while since I treated myself to some music so that's what I've done... and I am sitting here enjoying them as I type, and perhaps even as you read. I bought them from BORDERS, a shop which I only came across when last I was up north. I've heard there are BORDERS stores down south but I haven't visited one yet.

I've spent longer than I care to admit trying to figure out how to send a photo from my phone to my email address so I can upload an image of the grand city of Birmingham where I currently find myself. I have been assured this is possible, but if it is I have not been able to figure it out as yet; I need the manual, me thinks. I do not have my USB cable which I would normally use so I am afraid fellow bloggers, you will have to make do with my description of this fine place and these imported images.


Birmingham has a lot to offer, I can tell you. The Bullring, Victoria Square some beautiful architecture and much more. Enjoy the images! And the weather. Glorious sunshine for once!

Sunday, July 22, 2007

Writing and reading

I am currently working on some educational writing. My novel View from my Window has ground to a halt mainly because I'm actually finding the subject quite depressing. I think I will focus on a happier project for a while before returning to this sad one.

Yesterday I went to Waterstones and fell for the 'buy three for two' offer. I bought a book I had seen some time ago but did not actually buy- The Yes Man by Danny Wallace and I also bought The Life and Times of the Thunderbolt Kid by Bill Bryson and the 2007 Orange Prize winner Half of a Yellow Sun by Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie. So far I've started the Yes Man and am enjoying it, never having read anything by Danny Wallace before.

I wonder how many of you bought the new Harry Potter book. There seemed to be a good supply of them in the shops.

Oh and I've just done these IQ and business acumen tests. Not sure how reliable they are but they were good fun!

IQ Test Score


Testriffic.com

Thursday, July 19, 2007

Time to enjoy

I am currently reading The No. 1 Ladies' Detective Agency  before next academic year. For anyone who is yet to enjoy this delight of a book, can I whole-heartedly recommend it to you. The style is clear and the characters really entertaining and engaging. It's funny too, and I hear a film of the novel is set to be produced soon.

I'm also trying to get some writing done and catching up on all those hours of potential writing time I miss during the term!

Hasn't the weather been lovely these past couple of days, in contrast to the torrential rain earlier in the week? I did read, however, that the south is set to be hit by rain and possible floods, akin to those experienced by the north some time soon.

Sunday, July 15, 2007

Magpie Instincts and YN ranking!



I am in Wales at the moment visiting family and have just watched two programmes that centred on antiques. It got me thinking about what antiques I might have lurking in my house, so when I get back home I intend to venture up to my attic and fish down an old clock that is up there- rather bashed and neglected.

I also want to rummage through my side board drawers for the china plates I have come by over time. I may even dig deep and find the stamps I used to collect (and postcards)... who'd have thought it?

I think I'm secretly a bit of a magpie. Okay, not so much now as I used to be, but I think that's because my writing has taken over my magpie instincts. Writing is all about observing and collecting isn't it?

In any case, I've never been to a proper auction and I'm not seriously considering selling the stuff, just thought it might be worth getting it valued. Who knows? If it comes to a tidy sum, I may just go to the Caribbean, or, if I'm feeling sensible, put it away for the MA course I start in September!

Oh yes, that reminds me... writing, must get back to it.

**** NEWS FLASH ****

My GCSE York Notes on Journey's End are ranked 18 out of 16,857 GCSE books on Amazon's bestsellers' list! I've only just discovered this wonderful list which is updated hourly. I was ranked 16 at some point yesterday- not that I'm obsessing or anything. Let's hope the ranking translates into real royalties!

Sunday, July 08, 2007

J K Rowling: a small world


It really is a small world.

Some time ago I mentioned to my co-writer for the WH Smith KS3 Challenge English series, Steve Eddy, that I had worked at Wyedean School in Gloucestershire, now famous because of its previous pupil, J K Rowling.

He surprised me by saying that not only had he worked there also, but that he had taught J K Rowling himself. Given that we had not met there as I had taught there some twenty years later, I thought it was an amazing co-incidence.

Well, today, Steve informs me that the Sunday Mirror has featured an article about his 'illustrious past'. So here's a link so all of you can read it too!

I wonder whether my working alongside Steve means I too may have as bright a future as JK Rowling. We can but dream!

Thursday, June 28, 2007

POSITIVITY

This weekend, I hope to work on my novel and send it out to a few more agents and publishers. I've had a couple of requests from publishers which I am very excited about. And I am holding on to the encouraging comments I've received from agents and from friends.

I think it's really important to have faith in yourself and what you want and to listen to the positive things people say. I'm lucky enough to have some very supportive people around me so I can ignore those who choose to be negative.

So, as a reminder to me as much as anyone else, here's an excerpt from what an agent wrote to me:

'Thank you so much for sending me your novel. You are a good writer with a fresh idea... your talent is impressive and I appreciate the opportunity to know your work.'

I hope you all have a positive experience today!

Wednesday, June 27, 2007

Shakespeare's Sonnets and my Proofs

I literally have ten minutes. Then I have an appointment to keep so I shall keep this short and sweet!

Stuck for how to get kids excited about Sonnets? Try this!



I LOVE YOU TUBE.




And something cool for you to look at:
The proofs from W H Smith!

Saturday, June 23, 2007

Hey Jude

I typed Jude into You Tube and look what I found! It made me laugh, so I thought I'd share it. There is a wonderful original Beatles version too but I opted to post the one that was funny. I guess Hugh Laurie's high on helium....Enjoy!

Sunday, June 17, 2007

Time

Why I am blogging I have no idea. Call it a release. I have a ton of things to do and I guess this is an escape. I'm editing my manuscript, writing a report for work and editing a publication, so what did I do yesterday? I went to a classical music concert by a local symphony orchestra which was very good.

Earlier in the week, I met up with four other writers who've started up a support group locally, one of whom will be doing the MA at Winchester next year with me, although she'll be full time. It was lovely to meet some new people and good to contribute to a set of topics that we'll cover every month. All of the women as far as I could see were housewives who, after housework and kid stuff, have all day to write. Not being a housewife, I have no idea how days pan out when you are, but it sounds pretty idyllic to me.... but maybe I'm wrong.

I'm still hotly pursuing publishers and have just looked over proofs for the W H Smith series again. I hope the final set of books will be as good as possible.... I'll let you know when they hit the shelves.

Saturday, June 09, 2007

Entertainment

Hello one and all. Well, here I am once more in the land of blog. I am currently sending out manuscripts to publishers and agents in between work and dealing with life!!

With all this on, I thought I needed a break so yesterday, I went to see The Voice of the Heart- a tribute to Karen Carpenter, full of songs by the Carpenters. It was a last minute thing and in all, it was enjoyable although I have to say the songs were really quite sad. Well sung but sad. It was an interesting evening and my first visit to this particular theatre so I intend to go back for another performance at some stage. I want to see more live performances as I tend to go to the cinema a lot, last time to see Spiderman 3, which was good, as far as comic book tales go.

Last week, I also heard from Sarah, my friend travelling the world, who is now in Australia. It brought back memories of my travels there in 2000... I think the travel bug is setting in and I can't wait for the summer holidays. Still about five weeks to go.

Wednesday, May 30, 2007

The Apprentice and Literature Festivals

Just watched The Apprentice ... Alan Sugar is an interesting character isn't he? But then he has made a mint so I guess he can be. I finished looking over the proofs for the series due out soon and I am now focusing on fiction and sending out a couple more proposals.

I read my four year old niece my latest manuscript, a picture book- not my normal genre but I thought I'd give it a go and a story came to me. She said she liked it although truth be told I think she'd have preferred a princess or two in it. (She loves anything pink and anything with princesses in it!)

Ah well. I may take a break from blogging- concentrate on writing for a bit. Of course, I'll drop in if I have any pressing news! Till, then enjoy the writing, reading and whatever else you're up to.

In case you didn't know, Hay Literature Festival is on at the moment and in late June-July the Southbank Centre is hosting London Literature Festival.

The events I'd have attended at Hay look booked up or start at the crack of dawn, so I shall leave it till next year to attend. London, on the other hand is a definite possibility.

Thursday, May 24, 2007

Persistence and Proofs

Okay, I am utterly exhausted. Parents' Evening after a loooong half term can do that to you... I still have a pile of essays to mark! The proofs for the Challenge Series arrived this week and I need to turn them around pretty smartish... no guesses what the first part of my half term will entail.

Oh, and I had another rejection. I don't mind admitting that. I'm in good company, or so I am told. In fact, the York Notes I wrote on Journey's End tie in well with this as R.C Sherriff (the playwright) faced extreme difficulties in getting his play on stage. It was written in 1928 and was actually Sherriff's seventh play, and because it focused on WW1, people at the time thought that it would not be popular: people were sick of the war. However, the play was shown and proved to be a hit. It was made into a film and is Sherriff's most famous work, still performed and read today. I love digging out these success stories... keeps me going!

Here's the latest rejection:
'I appreciate the opportunity to consider your work. Unfortunately, I will not be pursuing representation.

I read the pages you sent, and I did not fall in love with this as much as I hoped. While I found your writing engaging, I was not enthralled with the story. As you may know, selling fiction is incredibly tough, and an agent must have passion, dedication and enthusiasm in order to represent a novel to the best of their ability.

Please know, that taste is subjective and I hope you find an agent that proves my concerns short sighted. Best of luck to you as you seek representation.'

Kind again, but a rejection nevertheless. C'est la vie.

I read an article recently about Kevin Brooks, shortlisted Carnegie Award writer. In it, he said that he had sent his manuscript off to every publisher in the UK before he was taken on by Chicken House. He was very encouraging, saying that many writers face rejection time and again. So I am definitely in good company. Sweet comfort. :-)

Sunday, May 20, 2007

Busy writing

I am focusing on my writing at the moment which is why you've not heard from me in a while.

All the same, I dropped by to let you know that the WH Smith Challenge English Series is advertised on the WH Smith site. The home page has links to it! And we should see the proofs pretty soon too. I'll also be getting proofs for the Philip Allan Year 9 Teacher Resource Pack in the next week.

I've had the proofs through for a couple of new resources for Classroom Resources and I am busy working on my fiction. I've also sent a sample of educational work to another publisher who asked for it. I'll let you know how that goes. In the meantime, I'm off for a walk and an afternoon of writing and editing.

An Update:
I had another rejection today but it was so kindly written it made me smile. I quote:

'Thank you so much for sending me your novel. You are a good writer with a fresh idea. However, I am not coming up with clear vision for selling this book and therefore don't think I would be the right agent for you. I had a similarly themed novel recently which has been most difficult to place. This might be influencing my decision. But your talent is impressive and I appreciate the opportunity to know your work.'

I'm not completely sure how my idea can be fresh if there is a similarly themed novel around, but what the heck, I can take a compliment! I certainly like the idea of my talent being impressive :-)


Saturday, May 12, 2007

Editing

I am feeling better today, so I have been organising myself- boxing books and files I don't use and generally tidying up.

I figure if I am going to edit my work why not edit my house?

Tidy room = tidy mind = tidy book

I have also decided to accept the offer I have of studying for an MA in Writing for Children at Winchester next year. I did wonder whether this might preclude me from writing for adults and getting published but I came to the conclusion this was unlikely.

My Writing Magazine arrived today and, in it, I saw a number of books which I thought I would list here for you all:

The Freelance Writers' Handbook- writing for and approaching different markets

3AM Epiphany- 200 writing exercises to help idea forming, revision, rewriting and developing characters

38 Most Common Fiction Writing Mistakes- does what the title says

How Fiction Works- how to write using effective words, sentences and paragraphs

Dynamic Characters-advice on how to achieve powerful characters

Wednesday, May 09, 2007

Corrected, Dejected, Rejected

Hello readers .... ( I could add infected to my title as I think I am coming down with something, but that would be taking the rhyme a bit too far methinks)

Well it is official: I have been rejected too many times for me to remember and actually too many times for me to care. Recent rejections have been interesting. I quote some for your reference. Please note these rejections all refer to the same book.

One agent said: 'Whilst I found your characters sympathetic, the story didn't grab me. That said, I'm going to pass.'
Another said: 'I wasn't moved as much as I'd hoped I would be.' She did ask me to bear her in mind for any other novels of this genre I write.
Another: The book was too descriptive and also too short, but this is just one reader's opinion. (a paraphrase)
Another just said thanks but no thanks. ( a paraphrase)

So, from this, I conclude that although the story was strong enough for some, the writing wasn't and although the writing was strong enough for others the story wasn't. Dare I refer back to the cycling analogy I drew on Friday.....? I get the distinct feeling that I am going round in circles.

Well there is only one conclusion!!! There is clearly a conspiracy against me ever getting published :-)

That, or this particular book is just not meant to be published right now. I'm a stubborn one though so I'm afraid it'll be back to the drawing board tomorrow, if I feel up to it.

Anastasia Suen referred to one agent's advice on her site- he said trying to find an agent is like dating. The same rules apply. Guess that means you have to kiss a lot of frogs to find your prince (no offence intended to the frogs- frogs are nice: just not suited to my book).

Someone will love my book and will publish it.

They will, they will, they will. I just need to hypnotise them into submission....

Friday, May 04, 2007

Re-cycling Writing

What's with the bike picture? What has this to do with writing? Well, you may ask. Please indulge me...

It is a bank holiday weekend- big YAY!

For those American readers out there, this means that on Monday I do not have to go to work. In essence, I get an extended weekend -which is absolute bliss, especially as I really want to re-read my teen novel and tinker with and tweak it.

Fresh eyes- some months after last working on it- have thrown up some revelations and I've decided to really apply myself to honing the novel to a wonderfully finished piece. I think the story is strong, judging by the number of agents who have requested to see samples and the full manuscript, from my query emails and letters, but I think I need to work on the voice and energy of the piece. The bike link is coming- bear with me!

When I first started the novel, quite some time ago now, I wrote it in a very immediate way in several voices. It started with a flash back - action scene- and then there was a bit of back story by one voice and then it moved to another. In total there were five voices of varying ages, but I was advised that because I was aiming at the YA, teen market I ought to put the novel into the one teen voice and to add a clearer picture of setting and not have a flash back so soon. Interesting stuff, hey? Well, I'm the sort of person who tries to get back up onto the bike when I've fallen and give it another go (bike link).

I believe in refining my art, so I did as advised... but I think in doing this, I lost some of the immediacy from the book. And this is something I want to try and regain. It's so difficult to get things exactly as you want them, especially when you sometimes get conflicting or contrasting opinions from people. I think some readers enjoy setting and description where others like action and sometimes it feels like I'm going round in circles (bike link), but I'm determined to get my old show not tell right. I'm going to try to get back to what it is I want the book to be. I am going to recycle (bike link) some old bits and add some new!

Whether I can do this in one bank holiday weekend, I doubt, but I can certainly get started. I'm also hoping to go cycling (very clear bike link)- a pursuit I have recently re-started, after a long gap. All I can say is thank God we have gear bikes, rather than the beautiful but rather more difficult to handle bikes of the past (final bike link). Not sure my poor old legs would have been able to handle them!

Monday, April 30, 2007

News

Here's some news: I got an Honorable Mention for the story which I entered into Jason Evans' latest contest, over at Clarity of Night - The Endless Hour. The picture certainly created a number of interesting entries. I think mine caused a few question marks but it definitely got people thinking.

Have a read- it's called Case # 453

I also heard recently that I got accepted to do an MA in Writing at one of the places I'd applied to. I am waiting on the other..... Ah happy news for a Monday morning.

Sunday, April 22, 2007

Educational Writing and Contest Writing

Hello one and all. Isn't it a beautifully sunny day? I intend to enjoy it, as best I can!

Yesterday, I went to the Society of Authors' Educational Writers Group 2007 Seminar which was both interesting and enjoyable. I met some new and not so new people and I learnt what the state of play in educational writing is at the moment: we are embracing the 21st Century and all that entails - electronification and globalisation.

Kevin Taylor, Intellectual Property Director at Cambridge University Press, and Kate MacKenzie Stuart, Head of Science Publishing at Hodder Murray, led the seminar and, later, David Orme and Stewart Ross spoke about school visits.

Today, as well as enjoying this sunshine, I am working on my resources for Classroom Resources and I have just entered Jason Evans' Endless Hour Contest. Read some of the entries that are there already and do look out for mine.

Why not enter too?

Most of all, enjoy the sunshine.

Thursday, April 19, 2007

Submissions: defined

A few people who write educational books have commented to me that the thing that puts them off writing fiction is the fact that when you write some or, in many cases, a full novel you do so in the hope of being published. This is different from educational and non-fiction publishing, where you tend to write a proposal or be commissioned, and, only once you have an agreement/ contract and or advance, do you work on the text itself. It's a surer deal.

Now, I can definitely see the logic in this, as in this instance, you know that you will be paid for your work. Increasingly, I'm finding myself so busy with my non-fiction work that I'm finding less and less time to dedicate to my fiction, especially with the day job too, and sometimes, it's just easier to work on something I know I can sell.

That's partly why I've applied to do an MA in Creative Writing. I figure that, at least with an MA course, I'll have a definite agenda and will have to designate time to the craft of writing and at the end of it, I'll have a qualification and have gained valuable insights. Let's hope I get accepted onto the course. For now, in an effort to combat my reliance on non-fiction work, I am reserving two hours a week for fiction. I've said it now, so you can all hold me to it!

Susan asked me recently how my fiction submissions are going, so in answer to her query, all I can say is they're still going. (I momentarily pondered the meaning of submission and thought it apt given what we writers endure when sending off manuscripts to publishers and agents.) I wonder whether I should be more systematic about it all and do a table, mail merge and send out thousands of letters at once. I know this is how some people operate but I'm just not like that; I tend to research things and target submissions to particular agents who look like they'd go for my work, and, so far, I've had some positive responses to query letters. I'm just waiting to hear back regarding manuscripts at the moment. Don't worry, folks, if ever my fiction does take off, you will be amongst the first to hear!

Meanwhile, I've just taken on three more titles for Classroom Resources and am waiting on two other potential educational projects.

Thursday, April 12, 2007

How to promote your book


On my travels through my space yesterday, I discovered Steve Weber whose entry and site are very useful if you are looking to plug your book, which, incidentally, is the name of his new book all about promoting your work through social networking.


On his site/ blog, he explains a number of ways authors can help the sales of their books, and it made for very interesting reading. Things like Amazon Shorts, reviews and Google book search are explained.

I was particularly interested in Sales Rank Express which looks like it’s worth exploring, especially as I am already fascinated by Amazon Sales Rank and what it means!

Another interesting link was to this site all about The Business of Writing for Children.

I hope you all enjoy exploring the possibilities.

Monday, April 09, 2007

Holiday Dreams

It's the Easter holidays and I'm spending a few well earned restful days in Wales, visiting family. I have caught up with my excitable (and now rather larger than I remember) nephews and my sweet (and cheekier than I remember) nieces.

Today I am dedicating myself to my writing. I hope to get at least 1000 words done. Down here in Wales the weather is gorgeously sunny and, having heard from my friend, who is travelling the world for six months, I hear Hong Kong is hot too.

Sarah- my friend- is on her second part of this journey, having started in Singapore and then moved on to Malaysia, only to discover she had dengue fever which resulted in her having to spend FIVE nights in a Malaysian hospital on a drip! Needless to say she was worn out at the end of it and she came back to the UK for a two week stint of TLC before heading back out to Hong Kong.

She writes these wonderfully full and exciting emails about her travels and they're written in such detailed and clear prose that I can really picture the scenes she describes. Despite having been a market researcher for an accounting and consulting firm, she definitely has a future as a travel writer!

I may use some of her work as inspiration for my own one day or, better still, I may travel the world myself. I still have quite a few places I'd like to visit. Canada and America are top of my wish list. Then there's the Caribbean, Japan, China, Mauritious, Tibet, Poland, Russia... the list is endless.

How about you? Any dream destinations?

Saturday, March 31, 2007

SLANG

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Saturday, March 24, 2007

Return to blogosphere

It's been a while, but here I am in blogosphere. What news can I tell you?
Well, I've been busy editing my school's termly publication and have recently set up a blog/ E-Mag for students to post creative writing.

I've also created an account at my space: www.myspace.com/jude_ensaff
If you have an account there, let me know and I'll look you up and add you to my friends!!

My writing has been slow of late. In fact, I've been a bit remiss but with Easter coming up, I'm planning to do a whole load then. Also there's something else in the pipe-line which may come to fruition. If or when it does, I'll let you know. Till, then Happy Writing y'all! (I've been watching too much American Idol, can you tell?)

Wednesday, March 14, 2007

Ice Cream, Published Work and Art with a difference

I went to London on Saturday where I met my sister who was down here with a friend. We had a wander, took in the sights and went for a meal at an organic vegan restaurant, where the food was lovely and good value. The highlight for me was finding this-




Yes you read right- Jude's ice cream! I didn't know such a thing existed, so of course I just had to have some. And it was yummy. As the label says it's ice cream with soul. If you're an ice cream fan, try some- here's Jude's ice cream home site!

The art at TATE modern was interesting too, especially the Surrealist section. I was rather taken by a particular piece of work which was placed in a glass frame and had a strange appeal, although I couldn't quite figure out what it represented. Only later did I discover that it was about sexual fulfilment. It all made sense then?!!

To add to all this happy news, yesterday, I got my free copies of the KS3 Year 7 English Resource Pack that I co-authored for Philip Allan Updates.

Now, I can eat ice cream whilst admiring my lovely work and thinking back to that piece of art. Can it get any better?!!!!

Saturday, March 10, 2007

Fingers Crossed: Agent lists

I've been a wee bit busy this week. I'm sorting out the end of term publication for my school and been busily approaching US agents... more on that later, and I'm currently completing application forms to do an MA in Creative Writing. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for all of that. (Incidentally I have linked to the origin of this action and saying for anyone who is curious!!)

In my agent searching travels, I found some interesting information which I thought some of you might be interested to know, so here are some US agents open to new authors. The list is on the Writer's Digest site, which is great, by the way. Anatasia Suen drew my attention to this.

If you're looking for representation for a children's book, perhaps you could approach one of the agents Candy talks about on her latest post. Enjoy!

Friday, March 02, 2007

A Day for Celebration

Yesterday was WORLD BOOK DAY
and St David's Day, both of significance to me.



As a writer English enthusiast, the first cannot pass by unnoticed, so in celebration of World Book Day, I devised a quiz. I've listed some of the questions below and I'm sure the enthusiasts amongst you will be able to answer them. (They're pretty easy really.)

In Pride and Prejudice what is the name of the family with five daughters?
In which country is The Garbage King set?
Name three books written by Charles Dickens.
What was the name of Sherlock Holmes’ assistant?
In which now famous road did he live?
Checkmate is the last in a trilogy of books. Name the other two books.
Who wrote His Dark Materials series of books?
The Outsiders, a novel about two rival gangs in America, is written by whom?
What kind of war did Robert Cormier write about?
In which fictional place did CS Lewis set much of The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe?

St David's Day is important to me as my mum was Welsh, and I went to sixth form in a school in Cardiff, whose motto was TUA’R GOLEUNI – TOWARDS THE LIGHT. Inspiring, don't you think?!
It must have been because famous past pupils include Nobel prize winner and physicist, Brian Josephson, the writer Craig Thomas and newsreaders John Humphreys and Jeremy Bowen ... and, of course, me :-)

Friday, February 23, 2007

Censorship: what's all the fuss about?

Having read Candy Gourlay's latest post and Scott Westerfield's whom Candy cites, I thought I'd chip into the debate over the Newbery Award winning novel The Higher Power of Lucky, a book I have not read, but after all this fuss, am very likely to read.

So what's all the fuss about?

The word scrotum which apparently appears on page 1 of the novel. The book starts with a girl over-hearing a conversation about a dog being bitten on the scrotum, by a snake, I hasten to add.

This immediately got me thinking about Mark Haddon's fantastic award winning novel The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night Time which starts with a story of a dead dog and which includes the F word on the first page. Similarly, this book caused much controversy when it first appeared.

I loved the book and when I was head of department, I really wanted to buy in copies of and teach it, but I was aware of some parents' potential objections to the F word on the first page. I know schools do teach it but given the school I was in, which was fee paying, I thought it best not to. That's a decision I made, but it didn't stop me recommending the book to receptive students (with a quiet warning about potentially offensive language).

As a teacher you have to be conscious of your role.

Saying that, I think some people who aren't, and in some cases who are, in touch with kids think children live in cocoons where innocence is best preserved. It's an idealistic view that is quaint and honourable but, I think, unrealistic.

I teach and I know what kids are like. From a teacher's perspective this is not a modern phenomenon.

Anyone who's read any Shakepeare knows how crude he can be. He had to be - to appeal to certain sects of his audience. As for Chaucer, have any of you read his tales? Sex- they're full of sex. What about D.H Lawrence's works? Oscar Wilde's stuff? Come on. Literature is full of controversy because art imitates life.

Teaching Shakespeare with words like bosom and ass (as found in my most recent Midsummer Night's Dream endeavours with Year 7 (eleven year old girls and boys)is great. The kids love it. If bosom can get a laugh, I think scrotum definitely would. Now whether this is good or not from a class management point of view is another thing. It definitely helped to sell the play to the kids. They were scrabbling over reading parts but whether this was necessary to their enjoyment of and understanding of the text is something else. My life would've been easier if I hadn't had to contend with pre-pubescent and in some cases pubescent kids tittering at every other word, and sometimes for the wrong reasons, I might add, but it was a hook which made them listen and made them engage with the text so that they could finally understand when I explained that Shakespeare meant an idiot when he used the word ass and was playing with language because Bottom had been turned into an ass by Puck.

So is a controversial word enough to say ban the book? I don't think so, but history has shown that there will always be those who will say, 'Ban the book!' for whatever reason. Lady Chatterley's Lover is a case in point, but there are many. Read all about them at the online books page of banned books. Would you belive that Red Riding Hood features and did you know that Beverley Naidoo's novel Journey to Jo'burg was banned in South Africa under the apartheid regime? So it seems that good and sometimes apparently innocuous books can cause a reaction.

Let me share a few stories with you:
In one school where I taught, a parent complained when another teacher decided to teach Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone; someone wrote in when a colleague started to teach Stan Barstow's A Kind of Loving and another when lesbianism was touched upon in a novel. So what are we to do?

Modern and not so modern texts deal with issues that kids will face in this twentieth century world of ours - pregnancy, racism, unemployment, homosexuality, relationships, abuse and yes they do include swear words, so rather than hide from this why not arm kids to be able to deal with things in a mature way? Otherwise are we not doing them a disservice and worse still are we not preventing the next generation from evolving? Let me present a worst case scenario: if we go down this route are we not heading towards a Big Brother world? Knowledge is power. Are we going to limit who has access to this power? I'm not advocating reading books with explicit sex scenes to toddlers just raising the topical issue of censorship. I simply pose the questions. Let me know what you think. Join the debate- go on you know you want to!

In any case, judging by past records, The Higher Power of Lucky is in good company. All this publicity can't be doing the novel any harm. Kids'll want to read it just to see the offending word and adults will buy a copy just to see what all the fuss is about or to censor it- of course!

Tuesday, February 20, 2007

The nature of writing and criticism

Kingsley Amis said 'If you can't annoy somebody there's little point in writing' and Ernest Hemingway said 'If writers believe the critics when they say they are great then they must believe them when they say they are rotten and they lose confidence.'

Today, I've been considering the nature of criticism and the reception that we writers hope to get when submitting manuscripts. I've also thought about the reception that we actually get and whether these two tally or not, and I've come to the conclusion that there are no set rules.

Everyone is different. What will appeal to person X will not necessarily appeal to person Y and therefore the reception we receive must be immaterial.

What I liked about Debi Gliori when I went on the SCBWI retreat last year was that she wasn't one for hard and fast rules. Her advice was just get the story down. Then work on it. I've come to the conclusion that that's my working model. I have to draft and redraft. On the other hand, other writers have given me advice about how to write based on rules or techniques. I much prefer the former approach but then that's just me.

With this in mind, I've decided to listen to others and take on board what I can see working but remain faithful to my own beliefs at all times. Just thought I'd share that revelation with you all!!

'The pen - or in this case the keyboard- is the tongue of the mind' (Cervantes)after all!

Monday, February 12, 2007

On course for ...

Mondays are my busiest day in work. Consequently, come the end of the day, I am ex-hausted, ex-asperated and ex-tremely tired.

I am so looking forward to my half term next week when I intend to re-lax, re-cuperate and re-juvenate, re-ward myself for all my hard work.

The SCBWI in their latest in house publication Words and Pictures included an article with tips from writers about how to keep motivated and how to fit writing into your life. One writer suggested rewards; mentally noting that if aim X is achieved I will receive reward Y definitely keeps me going. I'm very goal orientated in this respect. With that in mind, I've been planning what to do over the Easter and Summer, never mind half term which I've more or less decided upon.

Over Easter I may go on Alan Durant's writing course in France. I met him last year. For any of you who don't know his work,he's a children's author with books ranging from picture books to YA fiction. His course is on writing for children. However I also noticed that the Arvon Foundation is running such a course in the summer hosted by Malorie Blackman and Lee Weatherley, although this may be booked up. Candy Gourlay, a writer friend told me she'd signed up for the Arvon course run by Tony Bradman and Julia Bell which also looks good, so alongside wanting to travel, I want to do one of these courses.

It's just a case of deciding which and determining whether the indulgence is worth it. I should really save up for a new bathroom and the MA I want to start. Then again, perhaps I can do all three if I walk to work, starve myself and become a hermit for long enough.

Wednesday, February 07, 2007

News

Marion- editor at Balberry Press (for York Notes) let me know today that my notes have sold quite well and are being sent for a reprint! Guess that's good news. Cheered me up after a VERY tiring day.

And it's inspired me to do some writing.

I caught the last forty minutes or so of a wonderful film yesterday. It was in Italian with subtitles. It's called Life is Beautiful. Have you seen it? I can't recommend the film enough. In fact, I loved it so much that I've ordered myself a copy to watch it properly and as I've been studying WW1 and some WW2 literature with one of my classes, I will vet it then possibly let them see it.

Having seen The Return and Smoking Aces recently at the cinema, I can certainly say, I much preferred Life is Beautiful. A really moving film. Make sure you have tissues handy if you intend to watch it.

Saturday, February 03, 2007

Editing, proofing, copy editing

I've been working on a few queries related to the Challenge Series of books for Hodder and WHSmith today and it got me thinking about the different jobs there are in the publishing world. I read something recently about the fact that a lot of editing work was being done by freelancers. This, I believe, was the case with the copy editor for my York Notes. I wondered how common this was and that set me on a journey round the internet.

In my research on this subject I discovered this site about copy editing and I found out that, alongside other institutions, Learn Direct has information and a course on it! The Society for Editors and Proof Readers is another useful place to go if this area of the publishing world is of interest to you.

Other news- I'm hoping to work on The View from My Window this weekend, after my writers' group gave me lots of positive feedback on it last week; it's spurred me on, and I need to draft the beginning of a short story as a possible contribution to an anthology.

Besides all that, I intend to go for a walk and possibly the cinema tomorrow. It is the weekend after all!

Sunday, January 28, 2007

The upward struggle

Sundays. Hmm. Not my favourite day: the day that ends the weekend.

Tomorrow I am going to the BBC to have a look around. I'm also giving an assembly.  I have the honour of talking about the environment at 8.40 in the morning.

On Saturday I received flyers advertising two of my new books with Classroom Resources. Look!



My other weekend news is that I've packaged up a query and sample of One of a Kind to send out to a few agents in the UK and I intend to target some publishers too.

Why do I persist in this? Well, a few years ago I went on an Arvon course during which I met Alan Gibbons, a well known children's author, some of whose books have been shortlisted for the Carnegie Awards and other literary prizes. He is a teacher-author and during our discussions, he revealed that it had taken him ten years to get published. TEN YEARS. For some, I'm sure it takes longer.

Alan didn't, at that time have an agent, and yet he had managed to get published without one, so I'm using his example as inspiration for me.

Finding someone who has succeeded in the business and following his or her example is definitely worth doing. We can all learn something from others can't we?

Saturday, January 20, 2007

Philip Allan Updates Publications



Two of the co-authored English resource packs I wrote for Philip Allan Updates are showing on their website. Year 9 to follow. Yipee!!